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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
This is truly strange. You just updated this story as I was finishing the last chapter. I'm so excited! :D So even though you didn't request this review, I'm reviewing anyway:

Characterization: Woohoo! Draco is so sweet! He's helpful and caring and he hugged her! I'm so excited about that hug. And Hermione is trying to hard to hang out to herself and things just keep beating her down. It's so rough. I hope things start looking up soon. And I really hope they deal with Sybil soon and get her out of the picture. Draco and Hermione are wonderful together and I love the way you're writing them.

Descriptions: Spectacular. I loved the way you described her little cottage and the hug they shared. Wonderful.

Emotions: These were probably the best part of the chapter. I really felt Hermione's panic and sadness and exhaustion through everything that was happening. I do wonder how Draco was feeling through the hug though. Probably awkward, haha.

Plot: I love this story. And things are hectic again with Sybil and Mr. Granger, but Hermione and Draco are staying strong through it. I hope that continues. And I hope Sybil's threats don't ruin things between my favorite couple ever.

Interactions: THAT HUG. I loved it! That was my favorite part of the whole chapter. I'm so glad their friendship is evolving. And you're taking things at the perfect pace. Yay!

Keep up the wonderful work. Let me know when you update. GREAT job.

--Emily

Author's Response: Aaahh!!! Thank you so much for all the reviews! When I popped on and saw how many you left INCLUDING my new chapter (which IS strange but amazing that it popped up while you were reviewing) I was just ecstatic!! Thank you so much!

I'm glad that you liked the growth of the two characters in this one. I wanted to keep their relationship growing but still without making it too weird. I am trying to work on description in addition to all the emotional stuff that I like focusing on so I'm happy that you caught that!

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