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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
And, it's me! I can't believe you're leaving me with such a cliff-hanger! You HAVE to return to my review thread when you've written more, okay? :]

Characterization: Ahh, I'm so glad they're friends. Have I mentioned that? And Ginny was pretty great in her scene too. Hermione's finally getting over her prejudice, and that stupid Sybil girl shows up. Didn't I say in my last review that she was going to be trouble? I knew it. Ugh. What a pain. I hope Draco finds a way to tell Hermione the truth before that other woman does.

Descriptions: Quite well done. I really felt like I was hanging out in a cafe in the middle of summer with them. And I could practically see Draco's apartment and that skanky woman bugging him. UGH.

Emotions: Ah, Draco's emotions were perfect. I know he's being "good" now and all, but I really wish he'd just hex that Sybil woman into a slug or something. She's REALLY grating on my nerves.

Plot: Hmm, things really are heating up! I really want to know how this conflict is going to be resolved. And Jemima? Has she been mentioned before? Sounds a little familiar. GUESS WORK: I'm guessing she had Draco's son and then left him. Hm, hm? Yes/no? You don't have to tell me. I'm just pontificating.

Interactions: I loved Hermione and Draco's coffee "date." They're so good together. Their friendship is adorable. And the interaction between Sybil and Draco held JUST the right amount of tension. Perfect.

Style: I love your style, haha. It's so refreshing. I love how non-cliche it is almost all the time.

Pacing: THINGS ARE PICKING UP AND YOU LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER. RAWR. Okay, really though: I'm very excited to see what happens next. The story is flowing so nicely that I'm truly annoyed that I can't read more right now, haha.

Again, you're doing wonderfully. Please let me know when you update. I'm loving this story.

--Emily

Author's Response: Lol, you got lucky miss because my chapter made it through the queue before you signed off :)

I'm going to stay mum on Jemima's story until I'm ready to reveal it! I'm glad that it's getting exciting for you since I meant it to be so. Yay on my characterization still pulling through!


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