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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Me again. Am I getting repetitive?

Characterization: Yay! They're friends! (Sidenote: I don't mind the time-jump at all.) Continuing--Hermione is great here. She's finally making actual steps to moving on with her life. She's still sort of prejudice against Draco which is disappointing, but understandable. And Draco is doing so well. He's really manning up when he needs to and he's doing a great job of being supportive. It makes sense in the context of your story, though it's OCC in canon. I like it. :]

Descriptions: Hmm...I don't really know which way I'm leaning on this. I think we could've seen more descriptions of their facial expressions or surroundings, but it wasn't terrible. And their emotions were fairly well portrayed in this chapter. Pretty well done.

Emotions: Again, these were all right. There wasn't much going on in the ways of emotions here, but I think it was refreshing not to be smacked in the face by a Hermione-widow-breakdown.

Plot: Things are movinggg alonggg. Yay! I'm excited. I can't wait to see where they'll go from here. Now they're friends! But I feel like that Sybil girl is going to cause issues later. Ugh. How annoying. Stupid conflict ruining my love stories, haha.

Interactions: These were quite well done for the beginning of a friendship. They still have their awkward history, but they're trying to move past that and I can see that.

Pacing: I think I've mentioned this, but you're moving things along at a very good pace. It's not too fast. I appreciate that.

Good chapter! I'll read the next one very soon.

--Emily

Author's Response: I have been worried about my pacing because some people on another site I've posted on are all like "where's the Dramione???" and I'm all like "hold your horses! I'll get to it when and if I get ready!" I decided to hang it all though and just keep writing how I want to write it at since that's what matters, yeah?

Description of the surroundings and physical stuff is something I've been working on as you can see in the later chapters. But you keep reminding me on that and I'll keep improving on that!

I understand on the fact that there isn't that much emotional stuff and how that's good. I didn't want to keep being morose because life isn't morose!


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