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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Awww, I'm mentioned in your author's note! :] I'm really glad that I've helped in some way. With this review, I continue to encourage you to strive to keep moving forward and keep up the wonderful work. This is a spectacularly sweet story and you've been doing so, so well. I can't wait to continue reading, but first, here's your review:

Grammar/Spelling: I think I noticed...maybe two errors. So, nothing to worry about, but if you edit anytime soon, check for them. :]

Characterization: I loved Hermione's healing process in this chapter. She's doing better and better and you're doing a great job of showing that. I really like how you're characterizing her. Slowly but surely, she's accepting Draco. I love that you aren't rushing things. And Draco is so wonderfully contrite. He's such a sweetheart, trying to change over such a dramatic event. I like that he actually has a REASON to change in this story, rather than some stories where he just "decides" to. Well done!

Descriptions: I didn't see too many descriptions of the setting in this chapter, but see my next bullet:

Emotions: REALLY well done. I could definitely feel Draco's regret at what happened and his very real desire for Hermione to forgive him. And Hermione's frustrations are starting to ebb, which you're showing really well. And I like that Hermione is still mourning Ron. That's very appropriate and it's important to the story. Great job.

Plot: I love your plot. Have I mentioned that? I really do. I think you're doing a great job. You're avoiding a lot of cliches that authors fall into and you're holding up a difficult storyline in a believable way. Really well done.

Interactions: I liked the conversation between Hermione and Draco. They're finally starting to warm up to each other, and it's happening at precisely the right moment. I'm glad you aren't making them super friendly right off the bat. That's a relief. Sometimes I accidentally do that when I write Dramione. XD Oops!

Style: Emotionally, this was wonderful. You really portrayed what readers needed to see here and you did it in a consistent way. Keep it up!

Pacing: Again, I've mentioned this--you're keeping things moving along, but you aren't going too fast. That's very important and you're doing wonderfully.

Wow, all I had was praise here, haha. Good work! Keep it up! I'm on to the next chapter ASAP.

--Emily

Author's Response: I don't mind reviews that are just all praise :) I'm feeling a little repetitive with how much thanks you've gotten but you totally deserve them all because, as you can see, you have definitely helped me by encouraging me on this huge endeavor and also on improving on different aspects of my story! So THANK YOU!!

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