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Review:Gryfindor_Hero says:
i feel like this story is progressing rather quickly. Didn't Draco just try to kill Hermione YESTERDAY? Now, he's giving her a flower telling that she is his best friend? hmm. . .

Author's Response: I agree 100%. Honestly, the worst part of being a writer is going back through your old work and asking yourself, "Why in the world did I do that?" One of my hugest pet peeves is when characters just magically become friends, and yet that's exactly what I did. :/

I believe I remeber thinking that Draco had such an earth shattering discovery and needed someone to lean on per say. But now that I reread it, I realize that they needed more than that. They needed to bond and grow stornger mentaly.

And as for the flowers... :) I don't even know honestly. :) I have been thinking for a while now to take that entire part out, because it doesn't fit with the canon character AT ALL! Also I'd like to add in more chapters right here in the story. :) Just be patient for a while, and I hope to make it better for readers and you. :) Thanks again for the review! :)


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