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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Here I am for the review swap
Ooooh now I really like this chapter.

It almost seems like Tonks has some inner termoil still about whether she should have accepted the mission or not and that is shown by the flashbacks that she has showing the meeting. I thought the flashbacks really were excellent as whilst it recalled slightly what had gone on it also developed it without continuing the scene and I thought that worked really well.

I like your characterisation of Vincent too simply because he was slimy and I think if you can evoke emotion out of someone because you portray it that well then the writing must be brilliant.

I also like the idea of Tonks having an ally within the auror as it seems sometimes that its just a desolate place where no-one socialises in many fics! The idea also about her having to socialise with the werewolves is also interesting as it may help her get closer to Remus!

I love this!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Well thank you very much; you've picked up exactly what I was trying to portray. I'm so glad you think the flashbacks fit; they sometimes can seem really annoying or out of place - so I'm glad you think it works! :D

Awh - thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really hope you continue to enjoy the story! Keira :)

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