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Review:Cavell says:
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First of all - present tense! Second person! James! Three of the things I love wrapped up in one chapter - ah, bliss! There's absolutely nothing bad I can say to you about this first chapter - there's nothing wrong with it! I like James. I like how he isn't perfect. I like how he argues with his parents, how he knows the Traveller's Rest so well, how this is a slash and the guy isn't a redhead (or at least, that's what I'm assuming), how so very James he seems. In fact, I love your James.

In all honesty, I quite like the idea of this. It's very original, and very interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter because the first has got me hook, line and sinker. I love all the little things in this that make it so true to life - the two quick, one slow knock on the door, the three D's of Apparating - I could go on all day and still not run out of things to say, that's how good this is!

All I can say is - job well done, and brava!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Haha, I'm glad you like all of them, since they're all fairly central to the story ;) I kinda love James too - he's just so... him. I tried very hard to make him a combination of Harry and Ginny when I characterised him (coz he would be, you know?) and to avoid the stereotypes of James-Quidditch-Captain-dates-every-girl-who's-still-breathing-prankster-Sirius-Potter, because there's loads of stories out there like that. And no, the guy is definitely not a redhead. Definitely not ;)

Thank you so so much! I think you've given me far too many compliments for this, tbh - but thank you for each and every single one! It means so much to me! I was so nervous about writing this because it's something completely new to me, so I'm so happy you like it!

Aph xx


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