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Review:Cavell says:
Oh, beautiful. I haven't read the original version, but I have the brilliant feeling that this one is the one I would love best. Poor James - though his lovely speech about wanting to kiss her even if he couldn't still made me squee. How did Ellian not fall in love with him?!? Still, I love her anyway. She's so much like me that it's scary. I'm glad Albus found two dates - I love him in general, but I love yours especially. I suppose what I'm really trying to say is that I enjoyed reading this, so bravo! (Or is it brava?)

Author's Response: I remember the old one was something I wrote in a night and skipped from scene to scene with the most random transitions xD Lots of fun, but had no coherency whatsoever.

Ah, I know, right! I have a full explanation for this in my head, but there was no easy way to dump the info out elegantly. Ellian simply isn't attracted to James. If you asked her if she wanted to kiss him, her full honest answer is that she wouldn't care one way or the other, and she thinks James ought to find someone who would actually /want/ to kiss him. Of course, it's more than kissing, but I thought that was a good measure to use to describe it ^__^

Bahaha yes, Albus has TWO dates! 8D And all right, one of them is his cousin but hey, Lucy knows how to be a rockin' date.

♥ glad you liked it; thanks for the review!

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