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Review:agenth says:
That's exactly it! I mean; I never thought Id regret it until I realised that Id lost my virginity to a girl I wasn't even in love with! Al exclaims, looking pained.

Were you in love with the girl you were going out with at the time? I ask nervously, not sure if Im delving too deep.

- oh my! I didn't know that Al was a big ladies' men like James.
(From the 2nd Chapter it seemed like he was too much of a gentleman)
Anyway I love the dynamics between Olive and Al betetr than her and Louis.

Merlin, I thought they were going to kiss, I hope for it in your next updates? Please? :P
Although they live together, which is a problem, and there's still her crush on Louis... it's weird that he knows she likes him, hasn't done anything for 2 years, but suddenly he's interested... hm

Wow. Well I understand why Al is on Scorp#s side, but Al wasn't in love with his girlfriend, while Scorp is in love with Rose.
That's a big problem, ay.

I love how you made the Wotters family dynamics - that not everyone is buddy buddy with everyone.
It's weird seeing how Rose and Al aren't close just because of their houses.

Oh, Im so sorry, Al! I say sympathetically, although in the back of my mind I register that he actually did the same to her
- huh? So Was Belle the GF he cheated on, or was he just known as a guy who liked to have snogs with somebody else who wasn't his gf?

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