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Review:AlbusPotter123456789123456789 says:
This was quite a funny chapter, i had about threee moments that i found hilarious. "Sh! You’re on anti Malfoy territory remember?” then she sighed dreamily, “I wish it was that easy.Blanca, I’m seeing Scorpius Malfoy!” she whispered- i dont know why but i founfd it hilarious. I also pictured Ron attacking Scorpius. “That’s not very nice Rosie,” Mrs. Weasley said as waved her wand over a few pots and pans, instantly, they started to warm the food. “Now come sit down the both of you and have some proper lunch, it just might add some flesh to your little bones.”

Blanca turned to Rose and mouthed, “Skinny? Us?”

Rose giggled, obviously Nanny Weasley did not know what skinny meant, she leant closer to Blanca and whispered, “Just let her come to Hogwarts.”

Blanca shook her head, “She just might take over the kitchen and stand behind everyone’s shoulder until the tables are empty!” she half-whispered, half-giggled back.

“I can hear you,” Mrs Weasley said in a sing song voice, “And if you don’t come to the table this instant.” she left the threat hanging in the air for the girls’ imagination to fill.- And here all i could think was "Good, old Molly Weasley. Like in the books when she would always try to fatten Harry up. And now the last one -- “I think we could even bring some blankets up here, yes! That’s a brilliant idea, that way, we can spend the night here and not hear Dom speak about her Jean-Paul or whoever he is!” THE JEAN-PAUL THING IS TRES HILARIOUS!!! I hope we hear more of him in the future. Same with Phlegm ;) off to read the next chapter :)

Author's Response: i was hoping that someone would notice the comedy about this chapter. thankyou on the compliment about mrs weasley, i was really trying to capture her true essence like in the books.
thankyou for reading! thankyou thankyou thankyou!


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