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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
ScarletEye...

This is so beautiful!

I felt so awful for little Frank. This is such a tough lesson for anyone to learn, but especially a kid. You did an amzing job exploring the emotions and thoughts of someone so young losing his hero.

I really loved the way you portrayed Neville & Hannah. Here he is a war hero and she's much more conservative, but they blend so well together. I could really see the team parenting going on and feel their strong emotions come out at the story went on.

It always seems to me that little boys gravitate to their Dads more than their Moms. It was neat to see Neville & Hannah as parents and having to learn how to explain something so serious to their son. Their Daughter Alice was such a little sweetie. Knocking over the blocks on her brother... it was a very two year old moment there.

I was happy to read that Harry, Ginny and other members of the clan were their for Neville & Hannah. It goes to show how through hardest times your friends and family will always be there. I was also very happy to see Gran in the story as well. She is their rock because look at all she has had to go through. I felt really bad for her because here she was losing her son all over again this time in a more permenant way.

I liked how little Frank was the one who made Frank Sr. come out of his own world that he was stuck in. I think there is something so intriguing about the power of grandkids and how they make their grandparents worlds filled with undescribed joy.

I really enjoyed the Pastor too. I have this thing for wanting to see them put the best of light on those who have passed rather than just talking and not really knowing them that well. This was much more personal and really brought about the right emotions of those at the funeral home.

You really pulled out all the stops with this story and it was so well done. I could really feel all the characters emotions and I was crying right there along with the rest of them. You did a wonderful job with characterizing Neville and Hannah! This story has touched my heart and I am adding this to my favorites so I can always go back and read it over again.

Keep up the superb work!! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Ahhh you are so nice! Thank you sooo much for the review! Also, thank you for pushing me to keep this being written... I was having some minor writers block but you helped me through it (:

I'm glad you like how I characterized Hannah and Neville! I always thought they were very different and I always like that with couples, I mean, look at Ron and Hermione! ;)

But yeah, I actually found it quite easy to write little Frank... I initially thought writing a little kid would have been hard, so thank you for enjoying his characterization as well :)

I'm glad you liked how I added some of the other canon characters in. Even though it was mainly centered around the Longbottoms, I felt it was necissary to have Harry and Ginny's family in it and also Gran :)

I'm glad you got the story. That's always wonderful to hear, especially when its such a sensitive topic :) I'm sooo glad you liked it, and again thank you for reviewing and adding it to your favorites, it's made my day! :D



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