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Review:NaidatheRavenclaw says:

So Archibald is pretty awesome. His name is really long though, so Iím just going to refer to him as Archi. Because Bald would be strange :P Can he cook? Hahaha, no worries, Iím not going to obsess over him like my two Jameses.

I think my favorite part of this was all the names. Goliath Lockhart, I thought I was going to die of laughter :P Thatís just epic. Though seriously, who would want to have kids with Lockhart? Heíd be a terrible father. And Franklinstein was just the best. Who wouldnít want to have a nickname of a creepy dead-alive green monster. Except did you know that Frankenstein is actually the doctor, not the monster? So heís actually nicknamed after an insane scientist.

And naturally Hugo is a Muggle nut. Grandad Weasley must be so proud. I was going to be all like WAIT. IPODS DONíT WORK AT HOGWARTS. YOU JUST USED ONE OF MY PET PEEVES. But then you made it go haywire and it was awesome and this is like the first time Iíve read something realistic about iPods at Hogwarts. Iíd miss mine so much if I went there though. What would I do without music? :O

Lovely first chapter! Iím so excited to keep reading! I like this light happy humor. A nice change from your heavier stuff. Out of curiosity, how long is it going to be? Itís pretty epic so far.


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