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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Was this your first piece on HPFF?! Your writing has changed so much! I'm not saying this was bad because I had tears in my eyes towards the end. I'm just saying that your writing style is different now from this.

I really didn't get that she was going to die in the end. I knew something was going to happen but to have Draco kill her? I actually gasped out loud and then wiped a few tears away.

I found this to be really funny though:

Our tongues danced a fiery salsa.

^ Couldn't stop laughing. I'm horrible. I'm sorry but it was really funny to me and now I want some salsa and it's cinco de mayo! I want to eat some salsa and dance a salsa. :D

Author's Response: This was my first one-shot, but I had a novel before this one that I completed and have since deleted.

I really hate this piece haha. It's awful, at least in my mind, but I'm keeping it up for the memories, and the fact that it has oodles of reviews ;) I'm looking forward to when it gets pushed onto page 2 when I have that many stories.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it despite its age. It's nice for you to see where I started out.

Thanks so much!

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