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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Wow. Oh My Gosh. I'm completely blown away. All I could think of the whole I was reading the story was the scene where Snape was holding Lily's body and crying. I don't even know what to say...I am literally speechless. My hands are trembling! Does this normally happen? You are such an incredible author.

I love the quick mention of Harry and how Snape knows that Harry doesn't really deserve his loather, but he just can't help it.

Snape's feelings and emotions were so sad, yet beautiful. My heart aches for him, him and Lily could've been a happy story had he not chose to be with the Dark Lord. I also love the whole heartbeat addition, I was clinging on it too. I was just whispering to myself 'don't die. don't die, please.' but in the end she did.

This is such a powerful story! One of the best Snape/Lily stories I have ever read. Gah, you're an amazing author! How can someone be so amazing?!

Recenseo 2012,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: There is some serious praise in this review! It's really made my day.

All I could think of while writing it was that scene... I cried so much during that chapter in the books and then the scene in the film. So so powerful and so sad too. So yeah, I was thinking about it all the while I wrote it.

Snape has to be the most tragic character of all. He made some terrible choices, fell in with a bad crowd and it cost him his one true friendship. In the end, it killed both of them. I really wanted to express how much he must have hated himself, how he must have blamed himself for everything. That's why the Prince's Tale is so powerful for me, because it's so raw.

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

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