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Review:wicKeDwitch1316 says:
Hi Slide! I'm so glad to see you've started up on this story again! I'm not active any more, but I like to keep up with a few of my favorite stories every once in a while.

Oh, Tanith! Despite my excitement over hers and Toby's two kisses, I totally saw this coming with David. *sigh* As an ardent Tanith/Tobias fan, this wounds me, but in my head it still works out in the end. Tobias had Annie, so I guess Tanith needs to love someone else before she and Tobias can find happiness. Sort of be on an equal foot, I guess. But if she ends up with David, my heart might be broken :P

I love this story and admire your ability to write the day-to-day conversations, the actual plot. It makes each interaction between the original foursome so precious and makes me love each one that much more.

Can't wait to keep reading!

Author's Response: Glad you're still keeping up with this even if you're not much involved in the community! I'm not sure I'd consciously describe David and Tanith as it being Tanith's 'turn' to get some non-OTP romance, but certainly I am not of the school of romance which dictates one love in one's life, ever. Even IF Tobias and Tanith still have a shot in the future, it's certainly healthy for them to both have a bit of experience of the empathy and self-awareness which can make relationships work. I couldn't possibly comment on how it's all going to end up - David is playing an integral role in keeping Tanith sane and stable through horrific times, and that builds a tremendous bond - but certainly the fat lady ain't singing yet.

I thank you a lot for your kind words. This has really been a labour of love and so I'm keen to keep it enjoyable for the people reading. And yes, even in writing, since FtS has had so little interactions between the Big Four, they seem all the more important - and they really do write themselves. I hope this continues to entertain.

Thanks for reviewing!

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