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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
Hi ScorpisRose17,
Another story that I positively Love. 10/10 simply for the fact that it brings forth many emotions in me. You do have some small grammar errors but not many, I only spotted one or two in the entire story so far. The characterization is amazing. Draco is a cold heartless person, but not in this. You show a side to him without it being cliche, and he shows remorse for the way he is and the mistakes he has made. Your OC is amazing as well. She is funny but serious, pretty, calm and reserved in her judgment and forgiving despite her tortured past from being bullied by Draco and his friends. The plot of the story itself is interesting. Its sad because Narcissa is dying and Draco is having a hard time accepting that. This is excellent work. I'm glad you re-requested another review by me and just so you know its always open for you to do so. Don't think twice about it, I love your writing. I'm going to favorite this story because I really like it.

Author's Response: Hi there!

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.

I am SO happy that you like this story and I am SO honored that you gave it a 10/10 and your added it to your favorite list!

I am glad that you were able to get into the story and see what it is that I am trying to portray. Draco has always intrigued me and the emotions that he would experience with the family he has and the way he was brought up. I am glad that he isn't a cliche to you. I was really worried about the characterization especially with my OC since I haven't written one before. I am glad that you like her and Draco.

I wanted to show that Draco has these emotions and difficulties because he is human just like everyone else. Narcissa dying is the most essential part of the plot. I feel bad for taking her there, but she does serve a huge purpose to her son in the long run.

Again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You have put my mind at ease with the worries I had writing this. I promise it will be updated soon and I will definitely be asking you for more reviews. (Darn those grammar mistakes...at least they weren't huge and terrible)

Thanks! =)

-SR17



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