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Review:ewsoucf7 says:
Well, didn't things just get interesting...well, more interesting anyway.

I'm a little confused as to why they are going to Hogwarts, but I guess everything will become clear in the next chapter, hopefully. I actually really want to read more so thank you very much for introducing me to it, and feel free to request reviews anytime in the future.

The flow again was brilliant, nor did I see any spelling or grammar, which makes me definitely think that the first chapter was a typo.

I think you should be careful of how much is going on though, as I thought this chapter introduced a lot of concepts, and perhaps gave too much of the future plot away...though admittedly I could be completely wrong.

That said, I think the plot itself is developing nicely. You seem to have put a lot of effort into planning this fic, and it makes me think you know exactly where it is heading, and what is going to happen in future chapters.

I hope the reviews helped somewhat, and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Thank you so much for requesting reviews, and introducing me to your story. =]

Author's Response: Hogwarts is just the first of many stops for the Doctor and Angela!

That's actually surprising because I'm kind of making it up as I go...

Thanks for reviewing!

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