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Review:Athene Goodstrength says:
I really love Ginny's gifts to Hermione. I'm working on a pregnancy related fic at the moment, so I will have to try very hard not to accidentally plagiarise your fantastic ideas!

This may seem silly, but I want to know what Ron got her.

Oh, and this made me laugh: 'Five owls practically fell at her feet, before righting themselves and preening their ruffled feathers indignantly.'

I enjoyed this chapter, particularly, as I've said, Ginny's gifts to Hermione, but I did feel that it was a little disjointed. How much time is passing between scenes? What are Ron and Harry up to? I know that this is a Hermione-centric story, and she's busy being a pregnant head girl, but Harry and Ron are still her best friends, right?

Author's Response: I'm sorry about all the disjointedness. I find that when I plan out my stories, I plan specific events and things I want to happen and I find it hard to link them together in a well flowing fashion, especially in a story such as this one, where it's stretching over months and months. I'm trying to be better about that!

I'm glad you enjoyed the bit about the gifts :) Thank you so much for all the feedback!

Bri, xx

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