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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
So far, I don't see how this story is scary. I'm not scared (yet) but it's just the beginning. I don't understand why she would trust telling Reagan about her mission when (I think) that's one of the things you shouldn't it at a time of war. I mean he could try to get in the way of it, he could slip the info and someone that shouldn't know could find out or he could even get captured and tortured and then the other side could either force it out of him or use the truth potion to figure out what Jane is doing so they can stop her from figuring everything out.

That's just my opinion. I wish the chapters were a little bit longer too but that's just because I'm being greedy! (=

Author's Response: Just a note - Reagan is a she, not a he. ;)

All of the things that you noted are exactly why Jane really should have kept her mouth shut, and she regrets not doing so almost immediately... but I tend to think that even though she should have, she's still very young and feeling very lonely, so she succumbed to poor judgment for a little while with someone she's used to trusting. I don't love the way I covered it, either, so I'm probably going to go back and edit it a little to emphasise that.

Thank you so much for your review. ♥

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