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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Yay! Remus is actually one of my favorite characters. When I first started on HPFF it was Remus I liked to read about and Severus and now I never do. Remus doesn't get that much love it seems anymore.

I'm glad it's not a one-shot and instead a WIP because I wouldn't have understood then what was really going on. If it had ended here I would have felt...cheated? I guess that's the right word because all you really showed was the beginning of their relationship and alluded to dark times and something going on that she needs to figure out.

It wouldn't have been enough info for a one-shot (I think) but as an introductory chapter I can't complain. I would have liked to know a little bit more about their past relationship (or lack of) but I kind of got the jist of it from the few sentences you gave us.

Author's Response: What's actually funny is that while I like Remus, I don't love him - he's definitely behind James and Sirius in my heart (though the latter not by much). I chose to make this a Remus/OC for a few reasons - like you said, I don't think that Remus gets enough love, and I wanted to write something different rather than just another Sirius/OC. Additionally, while I like James a lot more and Sirius a bit more, I think that Remus is probably the most interesting of the three, especially for the premise of this story.

I see what you mean about their past relationship - I might look this over to add it in. :)

Thank you for your review. ♥


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