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Review:Athene Goodstrength says:
I'm really enjoying the characterization in this. Draco's still a preening, elitist idiot, and your depiction of Angry Ron is really good; a lot of writers take it too far and make him overly violent or just completely OOC, but I feel like I could be seeing the real Ron here.

I was a little confused as to why they were so angry with Hermione, although I know you haven't revealed that yet. At first I thought they'd found out about her night of passion with a mysterious stranger, and I thought they were being very judgemental!

I adore the part about Professor McGonagall looking like she may have a stroke if she has to say 'Bollocks'. I also love that this is a Hogwarts in which Dumbledore and Snape are still around.

Enjoying this story so much!

Author's Response: Thanks for the big about Ron! I've noticed that writers always tend to portray him as nothing but the immature, angry and arrogant boy, and I'm always afraid I'm overdoing it when I write him! So thanks for the reassurance.

Almost everyone is confused about that, but you're supposed to be so don't worry. You're not supposed to know all the details surrounding their anger just yet.

And haha I'm glad you like the password part as well! I rarely try to include humor in my writing so I was worried that would come off as strange to some people.

Thanks for the lovely reviews!

Bri, xx

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