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Review:MagicalInk says:
Oh my.

There truly are some one-shots that amaze me, and this might be the one on top.

It was so lovely (written, because it's actually really sad :( ) I can't cen think of what to say. I mean the whole candle thing, and then walking in the rain, that's just... brilliant! I love poetry and you can only imagine how mug I loved your descriptions and, is it called personifications? I know in French it is, but that's besides the point.
Did I mention I loved it?

And her epiphany, it really made me think, what is it anyways that I want? Because definitely, I don't want to end up imagining what it 'could' have been like but appreciate what it is. I'm serious, no rambling, -okay maybe a little bit-. And then, she rejected him, so he left, and she wondered, and he rejecte her. That's all so heartbreaking, I just... I don't know, all I know is it was really lyric and I loved it (and I've probably said that too many times).

Maybe a 10/10 could explain it better? Probably. I have to thank you for writing this and tell you I really admire your writing style. *sigh* I guess I just can't keep myself from rambling when overwhelmed can I?

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This little one-shot has received so little feedback, I was a little afraid at how it was being perceived. But your review is lovely, and I whole-heartedly appreciate it.

Personifications! Yes, that's exactly what they're called, and I absolutely love them to pieces. I'm really glad that you seem to as well, because there's a whole bunch of them crammed into this piece. Sometimes they're hard to notice, so kudos to you for picking up on them.

I think compliments on style are some of the best anybody can receive, partly because it takes a good writer to recognize style and voice (which you most definitely have). So thank you so, so much for saying such wonderful things about my writing. It really warms the heart.

Again, thank you for the marvelous review. I sincerely hope you have a lovely morning/afternoon/evening.


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