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Review:justonemorefic says:
Saw first section and t'was hooked. Well, also I saw the Laura Marling song and was like YESSS.

It was like being shown the gates of some fantasy land, and then, when finally permitted to enter it, being blindfolded. Lucy my dear squib I am already cheering for you. I do not know how you've got me all riled up on these political going ons already, but I'm like gah, welfare fiddlings and labels and rageee.

I am just going to adore random sections of this fic now:
-Lucy knew what she had to do. She’d pick a nice summer morning for it. She’d be up before anyone else in the house, just as if she was going to work. Then she’d simply drive away and never return.
-She checked her watch – another thing that set her apart from her colleagues, who thought she was archaic, anachronistic
-Shelf stacker was sibilant and awkward and suited her perfectly.

TWO DOWNTRODDEN SOULS. You know, I can totally imagine the Malfoys shoving Scorpius into school anyway by bribery or whatever to keep up appearances. Inquisitive mind, eh? Somehow, the standard answer of ‘it’s magic’ didn’t quite satisfy him.


Author's Response: Miss Marling, the coathook on which this fic hangs (don't mind me it's 1am and I am running on the last vestiges of my energy blargharghargh)

I sense your rage and I smile meekly because I felt like I'd made a hash of the politics and I'm glad to know they make you rage but sort of awkward because rage is not good and yeah. REMEMBER WHEN OUR REVIEWS WERE JUST AIRPUNCHING MEN o/

Draco would probably pay Scorpius to act like a normal kid. Funnily enough I have never investigated that in fic but now I have a burning urge too. 'If I give you fifty Galleons, will you please just stop wearing v-neck shirts...'


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