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Review:Aderyn says:
Wow, this definitely kept me guessing the whole time. From the banner, I thought it was a Draco/Hermione story, so I was a bit confused about her initial sadness, though I assumed she was marrying Draco.

However, as it became clear that she wasn't marrying him, and that the groom was Ron, things began to make more sense. I thought it would end with her marrying Ron, but then there was the ending.

Overall, this was well written. I liked the alternation from past to present, which, as I said kept me guessing. And I also thought you did a good job showing how Hermione came to love Draco, since I think considering canon, just saying it wouldn't be enough. That he left also seems rather plausible for his character.

I'm not the hugest fan of Dramione, but I think you managed to write a nice mix of drama and romance here, which was an interesting read. (Also, sorry it took me so long to get to this review).

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! :) I'm glad that, though you aren't a big Dramione fan, that you still found this interesting. I like that you were kept guessing because that's essentially what I was trying to do here! :) Thanks!

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