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Review:Ravenclaw_Charm says:
Hi! Ravenclaw_Charm here with your requested review! Sorry it took so long :P

Grammar:
Just found a couple mistakes, nothing too major, though. Muggle is capitalized, if I'm not mistaken, and I saw a few mistakes in dialogue punctuation. Like I said, not too big of a deal. Also, you claimed to "abuse semicolons" in your request, haha. I just caught one "abuse" ;)

I laugh as I remember the letter he wrote, describing his calamitous attempt at getting onto the quidditch team; as quick and well-built as he is; your son has inherited your dreadful clumsiness.

First semicolon is cool, but the second would be better as a comma. "As quick and well-built as he is" is a subordinate clause, therefore it needs a comma afterwards. :)

Characterizations:
I really enjoyed these! Annie was written so beautifully (well, this piece was written so beautifully, haha). I love how you described the effects of the war on her and how you wrote her reaction to Tonks and Remus's deaths. Well done! It was really sweet (yet sad) that you wrote about Annie being a slight metamorphagus. All her reactions were great; my favorite has to be her reaction to seeing Bill in the station. I never thought about Tonks/Bill, but now Teddy/Victorie makes some sense, haha.
All your minor characters were well done as well. Teddy was a nice mix of both his parents, which was great to read. Harry stayed pretty close to canon but with more of an adult vibe to him.

Other Babblings:
I really enjoyed the connection between Molly and Annie. It was perfect. Also, Annie seeing Bellatrix in her reflection was great too; sometimes I tend to forget that they're sisters because they're just so dissimilar, but I'm glad you brought that up. Oh, and the ending was perfect - bittersweet, loved it :)

Again, sorry for being late! Excellent fic! Thanks for requesting! :D

Author's Response: Ooh thank you thank you for the lovely long review!

Cheers for pulling me up on the grammar, I will rectify those two issues immediately. I don't actually know how that semicolon got there.
Blame the nargles.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed Annie's metamorphmagus tendencies, it was one of my favourite ideas in this fic; the way I see it, there must be a recessive gene somewhere for Tonks to be such a talented metamorphmagus, and I thought that a huge trauma might just bring it out in her mother.

I'm also really glad you enjoyed her reaction to seeing Bill. I have to admit to thinking a lot about Andromeda Black/Tonks when I first finished reading the books. She's a real heroine (a Black marrying a Muggle?!) who sacrifices her life with one family only to have her chosen family taken away from her.

I'm very happy that you thought Harry stayed close to canon. I decided that for someone who didn't necessarily know Lily Potter Sr or Harry, his eyes might be a little unsettling.

Ah, I could just ramble all day. You've picked out all my favourite bits to write about! The Bellatrix/Andromeda/Narcissa triangle is one I'd love to explore in more depth.

Please, do not apologise for being late... getting a review like this makes my day. Scratch that, it makes my week.

Very happy that you enjoyed it!
Athene xo

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