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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh wow! The description of this oneshot was absolutely riviting and had me captured from the very beginning! I felt so horribly for Snape in this and how he watches and listens as the last beats of Lilys heart finally come. I thought this was such a wonderful and short story about Snape's love for her and how he has always loved her and will always love her. All I can picture while I was reading this was the clip from the movie of him walking into the room and falling over, which is good because it means that this chapter has done a wonderful job of portraying this moment of his life and that it has evoked in me these intense feelings! I love how you mainly focus on her but then briefly mention Harry and how a child so small should make him feel the way he does but that he still can't help it. Really well done! I thought you did a great job with the emotions playing out in him and just the description you brought to life in this was wonderful! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: I was thinking about that moment the whole time I wrote this, so I'm so thrilled you were thinking of it too!

I've avoided writing Snape so far because he's such a hard character, but I'm very glad you thought I did him well and that you enjoyed it :)

Marina


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