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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
Hi Pen 2 paper
I have to be honest and say that I enjoyed reading the story and the writing, plot, characterization and flow is all excellent. I found very few errors but I want to say that the length of the chapters are both a benefit and a take away to the story. I found that in parts of the story I lost interest even though the plot line has my full interest. That leads me to think that the flow of the story could use some adjusting although I have no suggestions as to how. From the perspective of a reader the story is intriguing and I find the concept of the plot, not getting a letter to Hogwarts very uplifting to the story. You have a very good style of writing and it defiantly benefits this story. Good work. I hope that my review helps answer any concerns about your work.
Broken Butterfly

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for reviewing my story :) I'm glad you enjoyed the plot and found it intriguing. Thank you for your kind compliments and advice. I will definitely look into flow and structure of the chapters and see if I can adjust it. Thanks a lot for your help.
~Pen2Paper


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