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Review:Akussa says:
Congrats on winning the nerd's challenge!!!

This was brilliant! I don't know Torchwood, I admit it. But I enjoyed this a lot. I absolutly loved Marcus, he was a lot of fun to read about and such a subtle guy...

I noticed a couple spelling errors and typos. I won't point them all out but here are a couple :

"Quaffels"; should be spelled 'quaffle'

"Marcus excused him from class."; shouldn't it be 'excused himself' ?

"and nothing could distract him from not."; the end of this sentence is strange, I think you put in the wrong word

"Being a closet nerd is hell fun"; that sounds strange to me, like words are missing

Overall, it was a really great story. I laughed so much and had a great time reading through. Just do a quick read through to fix the small errors and it will be even better! Great work!

Author's Response: Even though I came third... Thank you!

Haha, Torchwood is amazing! It's so funny and John Barrowman makes it so good! *swoons* haha

Yeah, I wrote this in like an afternoon so I expected some spelling mistakes. I think I'll go through and edit it one day :P Thank you for pointing them out.

Thank you! :D

Jas


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