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Review:LadyL8 says:
Hello there. I'm sorry your review is a bit late, but you already know the result.

I notice this story instantly because of it's great description. You went deep into Roxanne's emotions, and this made me feel everything she felt. You transfer her emotions to me, and not many writers can do that.

I absolutely love how you show her dealing with this fear, rather than her running scared away. I think that gives this story a great message too: To face your fears rather than running away from them. The fear of death is really difficult to write, because I think that's something many deals with. I think we all feel that way sometimes. And you portrayed it amazingly. Your depth and your description makes it seem so real, and gives me shivers. I felt her desperation, fear and panic. That is writing at it's best :D

What makes this story so different from the others in the challenge, is that you transfer something to me, and the story give me something. It's hard to write about a fear, especially when you might not fear it yourself, but it's even harder to make the reader feel the fear that this character feels. But you did that!

Thank you for an amazing entry to my challenge, and you really deserved to win. I hope to see many great stories from you in the future as well.

Your Sincerely

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Oh don't worry about that - we all have RL afterall. :P

Thank you very much - that was my original aim with this story. I really wanted the reader to experience what Roxanne was going through and how in her own way she attempts to face it without burdening anyone else.

Thank you so much for your kind review - I hope it didn't scare you too much! It was a great challenge - I had fun! :P

Keira :) x

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