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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Man, Moody is really a brilliant man! He's someone I'd want to be around me in a time of distress. I really thought something was going to go wrong but nothing has so far (but they still haven't gotten out of the building yet!).

It seemed a little to easy for them to do everything they did but then again the guards are 'dolts' as Anastasia would say. And Moody makes a good argument now about not drinking anything but what's in his flask. If I were Duncan I'd get my own flask when I'm around him, heaven only knows what he could do to him if he thinks Duncan is a shady character (even though he's not. He's actually very humorous).

I'm interested to see if they'd have to go about doing some things the muggle way because magic seems to be too easy, you know what I mean? It wasn't over the top in the chapter but taking the polyjuice potion, knocking them out, the use of the elastico spell (brilliant by the way). I would like to see Duncan use some of his strengths too.

Author's Response: If I ever had to infiltrate a base in hostile territory like this, I would definitely want Moody there with me!

I totally see what you're saying about the use of magic, and that may or may not come into play later...

Thans for another review!

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