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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
And so it begins!

I have to say, Anastasia is a really interesting character. She's very chilling, tightly wound and serious. I could see her doing some terrible things in the future (but given her plans that's obvious) but how she does them will be interesting because she's obviously extremely smart, she's not going to go about things the way an amateur would.

Suddenly, the door swung open, and the merriment was interrupted by its loud crash and the sudden gust of chilling wind that accompanied it. A momentary hush fell over the room as a serious looking man in a finely tailored black suit, freshly starched white shirt and a plain tie stepped inside. He had short brown hair, was physically fit, and seemed to have a determination in his stride. By the looks of things, he was clearly some sort of government agent.

^ I really liked that entire part. I could just see it in my head. It's that moment that they play in the movies where the door swings open and that looming figure walks in and everyone pauses, a chill filling even the toughest character as they stare at the door way.

Excellent job. You never disappoint.

Author's Response: Welcome back!

Glad you liked Anastasia, and I definitely wouldn't want to run into her in a dark alley. And that's pretty much exactly what I was going for in that scene with Augustus.

Thanks for another review!

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