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Review:javct says:
Back!

I am so sorry for taking so long! Honestly, I wish I had a good enough excuse - school, work and lack of sleep doesn't seem good enough. But I'm literally falling asleep writing this so I apologize if it doesn't make any sense.

How do you manage to write this without confusing anyone? You've somehow managed to write an incredibly confusing storyline and make it make sense. I love this! The actual book that Molly picked up, it wasn't what I expected. I don't know what I was expecting but it wasn't that. I loved it!

So she's reading a book set back in the time of the Marauders? (Sorry, this is me half asleep)

I couldn't pick up any grammatical errors or anything (again).

Gah! I just love this story and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Jas

Author's Response: Haha, honestly it's fine! I know how life can sometimes jump up at you, so don't worry about it ;)

I don't know! Honestly, I have no idea. I occasionally confuse myself when I'm thinking through the details of the plot and how it all works...

Okay, the book. Yeah, this is confusing. Basically, she's reading the diary of a girl who went to school around the time of the Marauders, but I'm writing it like it's just happening... and, well, I can't tell you any more coz it would spoil the plot ;) Sorry!

Thank you so much - I'm so glad you still like it (and your review made perfect sense!)

Aph xx


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