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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Aww this was fantastic! I really loved this - initially I was hesitant about the flashback-through-the-past-years thing you had going on, but the way you wrote this made it just great, and how well you managed to get Hermione's perspective was especially amazing. I just loved the idea of weeping you used to tie every scene together, and how it all connected to this: "Only he had enough power to lift her high enough that she felt she could fly, and knock her so low she felt smashed to pieces."

I loved the {USE OF THESE} that was pretty creative and great. You wrote each scene so distinctively that it was easy and quick to figure out what was happening, and I just loved how well you managed to capture what Hermione was thinking. It's just a really lovely story, the development of Hermione/Ron is great! Well written, I really enjoyed it! :)

Author's Response: Hehe thankyou so much! Yeah, I was worried about the transitions for that too - but I'm so glad you liked it! Eee I'm glad you approve my Hermione, too. And the weeping was almost an accident at first, since I wrote it into the two scenes I had planned before realising I wanted to bring it out as a theme since it seemed to suit them so much :3

Aww thanks - I was wondering if it seemed too stilted at first, but I'm glad you found it easy to tell what was happening! Poor Hermione, I'm happy you could get in her head, though, and that their development made sense! Thankyou so much :3

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