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Review:Miss Muggle says:
:O That is a stunning ending. I am stunned.

This is really beautifully written. The feeling is all there and I feel bad for Draco. But then the ending. Stunning. He killed her? But then if I look back, the regret and remorse and guilt and all imply that he did something serious and wrong.

It is up to you if you decide to write more. I think it seems like a good idea. This is mysterious (in a good way, of course) and it would be nice to be able to read some more about it.

This is a really nicely written one-shot! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, this really made my day. First day valid and I've already got a review!
When I started writing this I didn't know i was writing Draco, if that makes sense, and i didn't know he killed her until i wrote that line, 'ok i lied. she didn't leave me. i killed her.'
I think i will write a sequel but it won't be for a while because i'm concentrating on another fic.
Thanks again and I hope you read the next one when it comes out!


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