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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
"Want to borrow my cell phone's thesaurus?"

^ Do we seriously have those on cell phones? I have to go search my phone now and see. I have the internet on my phone so I guess I do have it but I don't have an application for it. That's kind of cool though.

But anyway (sorry I'm so random).

This question might sound...I don't know but I'm thinking about it, you know? And I can't get it out of my head. I forgot how old Annie is, I'm pretty sure she's older than Lily right? I don't think she's too old though so...is that the pairing for the story? Is it Lily/OC (Annie). Don't tell me...well, tell me actually. No, I don't want to know. Hm. I'm conflicted.

I was really convinced it was Anthony and then I don't know there's something about how Annie cares about Lily that tells me maybe, just maybe they have a connection.

Or maybe I'm just reading into this too much. Well, anyway it seems to me that Annie has something going on with her as well because her life really just seems consumed by football right now and in reality we really don't much more about her. I think she can relate to Lily but I don't know how.

I understand that Lily is upset about what her family does but I'm kind of confused as to why she ran away, is that really it? Because I try to think of it as, say her family, or some people in her family were part of the army, would she run away then? Would someone run away because someone they knew was in the army and they know that it's dangerous and it upsets them so they leave?

I don't know. I just don't really understand I guess what's going on inside her head. I don't think you told us the entire story just yet.

Author's Response: I feel like some cell phones probably do, but I'm sure all will by 2025 (which is when this is set). They're also probably be the size of a fingernail or something ridiculous like that, but you know. :P

Annie is a couple years older than Lily - Lily's 17, Annie's 19 or 20. PM me if you want me to tell you who the ship is - don't make any assumptions because of chapters that have been currently posted. ;)

Lily ran away because she felt like she couldn't even put the danger out of her head for a little while because it was constantly around her. I think I'm going to need to rehash that a bit, but I will! :)

Thank you for the review. :)


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