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Review:Aspidistra says:
I'm sooo glad I clicked on your story.

The amount of detail you've packed into this chapter is phenomenal; I was able to get a clear picture of what was going on. I'm really liking the barista and how he notices/narrates the story without dialogue - it adds a little bit of mystery about the man and woman.

All in all, a very beautiful story; I was smiling the whole time I was reading it :)

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: And I thought that the overload of description in this was going to be my downfall. It means so much that you said you have a clear picture of what's going on! That is one of the nicest things you could say to a writer - all I ever want my readers to do is be able to 'see' what is going on while they are reading, so I'm stoked that you were able to!

The omission of dialogue is something that I quite like, but I am never sure about readers. I know how daunting it can be to look at a long chapter and see no quotation marks. I'm glad that you thought it worked, though!

This story does have some mystery in it. I hope that you are able to make up your own mind about the young man and woman and fill in the blanks yourself. I think that's half the fun while reading a story.

Thanks so much for your extremely kind review! I'm glad that I was able to make you smile.


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