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Review:MagicalInk says:
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Okay, first of all, let me tell you I really enjoyed reading this. I love the use of metaphors on stories, the common room, the rain..., it was simply beautiful.
It was all quite intriguing, I liked how you left his name for the end. It is also really dramatic, the poetry of it emphasizing even more, and you introduced the quote pretty nicely; it was heartbreaking.
Just a litte something though, I loved the mystery of it all, but who was the drunk boy? Was it James or Remus? I think just a little hair description would clarify that (black and messy or dirty blonde).
I've never read a Lily/Remus before and this was so sad I loved it. Really like a song!

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