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Review:Aphoride says:
Wow, it's really different to your normal stuff! Definitely not different in a bad way, I promise! :D

I loved how you wrote it. with the relatively short paragraphs and short little bits, little scenes and things, building the whole story up. Honestly, it impresses me - I could never do that. I'm far too loquacious :P It really worked, though, both for your style and the story. Also, I really liked how you put little bits in brackets and italics to show her thoughts. It added a whole new dimension to it, which was so necessary to it but really allowed us to go so much further into the story.

Ah, Dominique! I love your Dominique! I love the whole idea of the 'I believe' thing and the way you wrote her was so believable. I could imagine her being so young and so vulnerable and gullible to believe the boy she adored. I really wanted her to realise that he wasn't good for her and get better and I'm going to pretend that that's what happens to her at the end. She gets over him and gets better :P

Ah, this was just lovely! Lovely style, lovely length, lovely characters, lovely (and pretty intense) idea. (Also, as a little side note, I think you also handled the two topics surrounding Dom really well, so kudos for that!)

Aph xx

Author's Response: Hello Aphy my love! Thanks so much for this gorgeous review :3 *hands cookies that I've been munching greedily*

I know! It's so different it's scaary :) I was sorta scared of posting it but... I feel I got the emotions right in this :0

Yay!! The layout wasn't confusing! That was one of my main concerns. Aw, thankyouthankyouthankyou!

I think YOU'RE lovely
xx


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