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Review:hetty says:
I've seen this on the archives before but only just got around to reading and I'm glad I did! I'm in love with most of your characters (except the Medusa's although I find Laynia quite funny to read).

The kiss between Louis and Natasha and then James appearing, all the awkwardness! (I love awkward scenes like that, much better than the perfect kiss scenes with butterflies and what-not ha ha). That's definitely my favourite scene and the end bit with Georgie standing up to Laynia, I love that too :)

Something about Natasha makes her really likeable, I think how you characterised her was just so...normal? I don't know but she's a refreshing change to your usual quirky!OC and I love how Louis is an average (very good looking) guy and not really and idiot or anything.

And ooh a sequel? Is the main character going to be one already mentioned or a completely new OC? Hmm, well I'm looking forward to it :3

This was a really good chapter and overall story :)

Author's Response: Ooh, why thank you for checking this out! And ha, it's okay, I don't like the Medusas either, but Laynia is ridiculously fun to write. Hey, that was my favourite, too! Very awkward, all James' fault, ha. I kinda prefer all the awkward scenes, too, it's interesting to find out what the character will do.

I'm glad she was likeable! She is far more normal than most OCs, isn't she? And refreshing! Aww, thanks. And of course, Louis can't be an idiot, he's in Ravenclaw after all! The main character for the sequel thing was once very briefly mentioned in the first chapter, so you probably won't remember her.

Thanks a million for reviewing!

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