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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
She hadn't joined the D.A. or fought besides her classmates, because she'd been too afraid of ruining her own dreams of conquering the world. She had been a gifted witch, sorted into Ravenclaw for a reason, and she had been so focused with earning good grades than she hadn't paid proper attention to the way her world crumpled around her.

^ You know. I never thought about people not fighting with the DA or Hogwarts or whatever. I just always seem to think of it as, the Slytherins left, and everyone else in Hogwarts (that wasn't underaged) fought and that's that, no questions asked. I never really gave it a thought that some wouldn't have fought even if they could because let's face it, in the real world, we all don't go out and fight in the wars, do we? No, we have troops or people that are qualified or people that volunteer to fight. We all don't just mad rush out there and fight against another country.

I'm rambling. But I really liked that paragraph I took out of the story because it made me think. You have a strong beginning here. I've never been a fan of time traveling stories only because you know you can't change the past, they know from the very beginning and yet they still think they can and then if they do it just makes everything terrible and they have to fix it all over again. I don't know it just seems a bit sad to me, is all. But I thought this was a great chapter and you have an interesting idea here.

Nice job. :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do think the whole not fighting thing is an interesting aspect usually not thought about in HP, so it was interesting to explore.

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