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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Congrats on being made a TA!

I loved this chapter, so much setup. :) I read it the other day at work but I'm finally here to leave a proper review.

The humor is there. I know you said you've been worried about it but I was smiling through the whole chapter. I loved the bit about 'pitching to Incastra' about the calming draught killing someone. I was laughing for a while at that one :)

I have one small suggestion if you go back and edit; I think you should give names to the seventh year Gryffindor and third year Hufflepuff-- they showed up twice in this chapter and if they are going to be on the staff full time; I felt myself wondering what their names were when they were brought back into the conversation again. Just a suggestion though, feel free to ignore :)

I loved the little interaction with Lorcan! I really got a good sense of his realization of the slip up, along with Lily's ideas turning that there may be something more to the conversation.

Great work on this! I can't wait to read more♥

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Honestly, your input means so much to me. Ahhha, THE HUMOR IS THERE. LET ME REJOICE. That's so exciting. I made someone laugh! :P I can die happy.

That's definitely a valid suggeston. In fact, I'm going to go do that right now (benefit of being a TA :D) So yeah, it was mostly me being lazy and not wanting to think of names. I'll do that in a sec.

Lorcan finally shows up xD I'm glad you liked that bit :D

Thanks again!

-Naida


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