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Review:charlottetrips says:
That was really beautiful. I think youíre the first Sirius/Lily that Iíve read. Not that Iím a Maraudersí era reading girl but I donít really entertain the idea of Lily with anyone other than James or Severus (and even then, itís an unfulfilled way). But this, the way youíve written it works. Though you donít mention James in it at all, itís clear that thatís who Sirius is talking about when he wants Lily to be with someone who is safe, who isnít him.

The way that Sirius holds himself back from Lily was well done. You donít state it so explicitly until towards the end, but I already have the idea of it because of Lilyís observations and feelings. Her own love for him is evident in how she acts and her thoughts. I love the passion and chemistry that fills this one-shot without even them kissing until the very end.

The imagery of Sirius being like the starsóvisible, steady and just as unreachableóbasically summed him up for me. Even though your Sirius is still the impulsive, not afraid to speak his mind guy, the underlying core of loyalness and love is evident and I feel that this line just said it.

xChar

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