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Review:Noliah says:
Hi,

I'm French so for your eyes I'm not going to write a lot. ^^'

I really like your fanfiction, I'm just at the first chapter but I'll read all your story during my holidays.

Ah, yes your French is really good but they're some errors:

Tu sais qu’on l’interdit de les gens de sangs purs se frappent

-> Tu sais qu'on interdit aux sangs purs de se frapper
ou
-> Tu sais que c'est interdit que les gens de sangs purs se frappent

It's kinda the same

And

Je suis très déçu dans toi
-> Je suis très déçue de toi

I understand your sentences but it's better with those bellow

Great Job and see you next chapter.

Bien joué, j'aime beaucoup ton histoire et je suis impatiente de découvrir la suite, j'aime également ton style d'écriture ( ah ah désolée je ne sais pas le dire en anglais )

Bisous,

Valentine, XoXo

Author's Response: Merci beaucoup, Valentine! Je suis ravie de recevoir un 'review™' francais ! Je me sens comme un vrai ecrivain internationalement connu ! Haha.

Merci pour les corrections linguistiques - il y a plus de 5 ans que j'ai ecrit le premier chapitre, et je sais qu'™il y en a des erreurs terribles francaises.

Encore une fois, je te remercie pour tes commentaires aimables, et j'™espere que trouves la suite aussi interessant que ce chapitre-ci.

joojoo x


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