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Review:shadowcat2 says:
I feel so bad for Hugo. Making that decision and leaving his sister stranded will make him feel so guilty for a while.

Charlene. Haha. The way she distracted the guards was really amusing.

This chapter was so action packed. The part about the ambulance and the brooms was amazing. I wish Harry didn't become so reckless. I guess it must be hard on him. Finally, Neville. Haha. He still can't fly properly. I was just wondering how did Neville know that he might need to fly? I guess he got informed my Hermy. It's not important. the question just popped into my mind.
5 more to go. See you!

Author's Response: Poor Hugo is in way, way over his head. He did have to make a very difficult decision, but it was probably the correct one.

You may recall Charlene from way back in chapter 5. I was very pleased to be able to re-use that character and get something really amusing out of her.

I had this idea of including a broom-car chase in the story from the very beginning. The precise structure of it went through a few iterations, but I think it turned out alright. It gave me a chance to include Neville in a pretty entertaining and canon-consistent way, which was a bit plus.

Neville knew that Susan was badly hurt and that Ron and Harry had taken her to St. Mungo's. He definitely realized that they might need some help to get her to safety.

Thanks so much!

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