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Review:justonemorefic says:
Oh oh oh the pacing and mood of the beginning it's like, it's like being sucked into a vacuum of stars (a bit influenced by the banner there too), too fast but so vivid. One soul after another like constellations. Itís only a veil, for goodnessí sake, a curtain canít kill somebody. I really love that line, it's so sardonic.

And this: you take your wand from your robes, wondering if it is possible to splinch memories as you Disapparate. can I marry that? Ahh, he's so alone there ;A;

I never really thought about the scene where Tonks finds out, I realized! I love how you used elements of Sirius alongside her, wraps it all together. she is twenty-three with bubble-gum hair and Siriusí eyes and a smile that is nobodyís but hers. And she really is that -- I can see her almost like a soft glow in the grey. Heart achingg D:

♥ miss youuu

Author's Response: GINA GINA GINA GINA GINA.
EXAMS FINISH TOMORROW AND I WILL BE BACK. ISH. UNTIL SEPTEMBER. WOO.

I don't remember the beginning of this but THANK YOU. The curtain line sticks out like a sore thumb but I liked it too much to scrap it for the sake of pretty words :D

Marry away. I still don't quite like the phrasing of that sentence :P

I wanted a moment that gave her hope of a relationship more than one in which she finds out about Sirius dying but they were both quite interesting in my head.

Miss you tooo. Thank you oodles for this and I promise I'll catch up with your stuff this summer. LIFE ALWAYS GETS IN THE WAY.


xx


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