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Review:justonemorefic says:
Oh, the dream. I adored how you handled the transition from the forest into the cottage room, by the way, and so gorgeous and haunting as James' stag turned skeletal. I can see how this vision of James isn't really him as much as Lily's guilt; it's herself holding herself back, understandably though.

Angsty angst tearing at my soul ;A; But indeed “Lily, you can’t have it both ways.” you have to make a decision woman! Just to stop the pushing and pulling. Oh oh oh but the end to that scene :3 EEE so cute. His smirk and her I'll miss you and their KISS my oh my, maybe this will be all right after all.

Ahh, Melora D: deary me, I hope Dumbledore will bring answers.

♥ another great chapter :3 flew by so fast!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it Gina! I just couldn't see Lily moving forward with a clear conscience just yet; poor girl.

I had a creepy time writing the dream sequence; I suppose I'll get some interesting reactions from actual J/L shippers who may get this far in the two stories! You're entirely correct that the dream is merely Lily's guilt talking, nothing prophetic, though who knows whether she might be suspicious after the multiple universe thing in volume 1.

I enjoyed writing Lily's reactions to Severus's drawing back in upon himself -- knowing she had to do it, but wishing she didn't have to. Boy, Lily is mostly a pragmatist but she can give Severus a run for his money in the liver-chewing department here! Heh.

Thanks so much Gina, I always get a squee when I see your reviews! I hope it's not too long before I have the next chapter completed.


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