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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Me again. Wah! I'm so sad! This just...wow. I'm just completely depressed about this chapter. It shouldn't happen like this! I want them to be together, not fight! This is so awful! :[

Okay, reviewing now instead of complaining:

Characterization: Wonderful, as always. I love the dynamic between Caprice and Sirius. It's so realistic. She's lost her patience with him, and I get that. It's so sad to read though, when I know that he loves her.

Descriptions: The emotions here were riveting. They made me want to cry. I can feel how hurt she is, but I still just want her to forgive him. I know it doesn't work that way, but I still want it to...

Plot: Things are royally messed up now. You're moving the plot along so well. I was glad you brought up the disappearances in the last chapter, so that's good. And emotionally, things are just going haywire. I can't wait to see if things get better or worse from here. It's so sad right now!

Interactions: The fight between Caprice and Jason was so sad. I didn't want him to be hurt, but I DO want Sirius to be with Caprice. Though, right now, that's not looking positive. THEIR fight (between Caprice and Sirius) was awful. I could almost see the whole thing. I've had friendships like this before, so I know how much it sucks. You're doing a great job showing all the emotions connected to this. Keep up the good work.

Style: You know I love your style, haha. I adore it. Everything is so raw and realistic. Beautiful.

I just want everything to be okay again. :[ I hope it is soon. This is sad.

--Emily

Author's Response:
Hi again Emily!

I know, I'm so sorry about the depressing heart-breaking part of the chapter but it was needed! :(
I'm Sorry!

I know that this was sort of turning thing around 180 degrees but you would have seen why in the next chapters. It was needed for the plot.

You always tell me the emotions are great, and every time I am thankful because as much as I like writing it, it's hard to write it without seeming to be repetative.
Yes the plot is royally messed up and things aren't looking good for Capri and Sirius. Afraid things will get a bit worse before they get better. I shouldn't but I'm really enjoying the bumpy road they are on! :/
Thank you so so much as always for your time and dedicated reviewing :)


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