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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hey there! It's me again. I know it's been MONTHS since I've reviewed, but things have been busy. I'm back now and I'll continue to review as often as possible. So, let's get started:

Characterization: This was another great chapter, of course. It's sad to see Caprice and Sirius not being together. Jason's not good enough for her. That's disappointing. And Regulus! I've always been fond of him, so it's sad to see him all creepy and weird here, but it's not surprising. He probably wasn't the nicest guy in school. He's so sinister! ICK.

Descriptions: you described how Caprice was feeling very well. It's always a pleasure to see emotions portrayed so realistically.

Plot: I wonder what will happen next! Will Sirius be really angry about Regulus' creepiness? Will Caprice second-guess her choices? Will Jason just GO AWAY? I don't know, but you have me wondering!

Interactions: The only part that was a bit odd was the interaction between Caprice and James/Sirius when they were angry at Snape. It was strange to see her convince James not to hex Snape. Odd...Other than that, though, things were great. I really loved how eeire Regulus was. Well done!

Pacing: Well done, but I can't wait for them to get together! It's such a long time! :[ Okay, I'm done whining.

Last thought: pygmy puffs don't exist yet. Fred and George bred them. They're actually just miniature puffskeins. So...a puffskein WOULD exist at this time.

Anyhow, great chapter. I'll read the next one ASAP.

--Emily

Author's Response: Hey Emily!
I’s sorry its taken ages for me to respond to this great review! I’ve been busy trying to update all the WIPs I’ve put on hold because of RL and loads of other stuff. Anyway, thank you so much for coming back again to review my story.
I know but I’m building Sirius and Cappie slowly and I want them to develop individually as characters as much as the story needs them to build together as a couple. Everything has its own time. And yes, Jason is a complication for Sirius/Capri but, well I’m sure I’ll read your thoughts in the future chapters :P
I love that you are just as crazy about emotions as I am. For me it makes the story real. And I’m glad you think mine are realistic in the chapters you read.
I have plans for Regulus too which actually recently surfaced and I’ve included into the plot (maybe even after you posted this review) I hope that the road Jason and Capri are taking become clearer with the next few chapters.
Caprice isn’t very violent and she cares just as much about James as she does Sirius. She didn’t want them in trouble and so she didn’t let them hex Snape. She’s not a “maraudette” to put it bluntly. She’s one of the girls but plays Quidditch with the guys and in love (well was,) with her best friend.
I’m really glad you loved Regulus though, I’m pretty nervous about writing his character. I see him as a shady unpredictable person and I’m not sure how to bring that into the words. But I’m still happy that you liked his eerie behavior! :)
And thanks for the point-out of the Pygmy puff mistake! I will be correcting that soon :)
Thank you so much for reviewing Em! On to the next! :D


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