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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums here to review for you! :D I know you requested this review MONTHS ago, but things have been very hectic for me...I'm sorry! So, let's go over things:

First off, wow. I really loved this. Your style was beautiful. I'll chat about your concerns first, then move on to my other thoughts. So, here we go:

Characterization: loved it. Molly was so realistic. I liked how vulnerable she seemed in such a difficult situation. Very well done.

Flow: This was flawless. I realized early on what was happening and from there, things really made sense. It was really sad seeing everything from Molly's POV, but it was obviously the best choice for this story. Great job.

Emotions: these were absolutely amazing. I recently went to a funeral, the first I'd ever been to, and I can see exactly why she was feeling how she was. Her emotions, shock, hurt, confusion, it was all very realistic. Terrifically done.


Now for my other thoughts:

Descriptions: the beginning with your description of Lucy was wonderful. I loved seeing through Molly's eyes what was happening. And I love that this story is so original. I've never seen anything like it.

Plot: Again, I appreciate your originality. Not many people write about Molly and Lucy and this particular plot is all new to me. Great job.

Style: Beautiful. Realistic. Painful. Wonderful.

Terrific first chapter. I'm really sorry it took this long for me to get to it. You did wonderfully. Keep up the good work.

--Emily

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so sorry how long it's taken to respond to this! I thought I had and then low and behold i saw this today still in my unresponded reviews! Bah! I'm so sorry! It's not that i didn't appreciate what you've said because i do! SO much!

Gosh, i don't even know where to begin. I never thought that this story would get the sort of reaction that it's getting. I never thought it would just that sad and painful for people to read (which was a little naive of me i suppose but i just didn't that my writing would convey that sort of depth and sadness as it seems like has). I am however pleased that i was able to capture this moment. I think the death of someone close is so hard and unbelievable cruel to have to go through and it made me sad for Molly to have to deal with the loss of her only sister.

Thank you for your ubberly kind review! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it ;D


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