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Review:BeaJerry says:
YO DAWGIE, IT'S ME FROM THE REVIEW SWAP!
oo, i've actually been meaning to read this for a while, but never got around to it. so tg for the review swap! :3
anyway. this may just be the first time i'm not a rose&scorpius shipper! even though she's only said a few lines, rose annoys me so much. maybe it's because we're reading it from hannah's point of view, though.
i found the bit in the prologue, about lily and graham the hufflepuff, hilarious! reminded me of ron and ginny, haha.
the only critism is characterization. from the first chapter, hannah doesn't seem to have any identifiable personality, which is a bit annoying for me personally, as i'm a big one for characters. and is hannah the only main oc character in the story?
i suppose i'll find out!
bea xo

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm glad you got to read a bit of it! Hopefully you'll get to read more.. the story gets better as things go on so, yeah.

wow. I'm special. All stories do that. Okay. Ignore that.

anyways!

Yep, Rose is ment to be irritating because this is from Hannah's perspective. At this point Hannah sees her as the only thing standing in the way of her being with Scorpius.

haha.. I think with James gone, Al sees it as his personal responsibility to protect little Lily, whether she likes it or not :p

Hannah grows as a character a lot more in chapter two and three. When I wrote this I was really focused on bringing the plot into the story that her character suffered.

Nope, her best friend, Sophie will be introduced in chapter two.

Thanks so much for reading, and for the review!

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